Revision Pains

I have decided to revamp The Realm Within.  Why?  Because there were many unrealistic plot twists and, after a certain point, the main character turns into a Mary Sue (and we don’t want that).  So, the overall outcome of the story remains unchanged.  How they go about getting to that point has been drastically altered.

Also, I have started a club on deviantART alongside a good friend of mine called Crystal-Ink.  It is a place for advanced writers to hone their skills and gain more inspiration.  I have high hopes for the newfound literature community.  Wish it good luck.

Thanks,

Amriah

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